Dear Matt,
I think you had some of the best responses I read for this assignment. Both examples were just so good! First off, I loved your statement about a mother and their child. I never really thought of mothers like that but I understand what you are saying, they are protective of their children so it is like they have two minds one for themselves and one to worry about their children, right? And I also enjoyed the statement about how we all are a bit selfish which is something I also noticed. It is so annoying when something so big to you is reduced to something small to your friends or family. And you always get the same response! Ether aww I’m sorry to hear that or like a long story about them, your so right >< It's like we all care mainly about ourselves without even noticing. Although I loved this post, I do agree with Stephanie. I don't think Banach means we can't care for each other (even though he is making it sound that way), I think he means that no matter how hard we try, fully understand each other isn't possible. Overall great post, would love to see you write a little more on the topic though because you brought up brilliant points-
Yasmin!
Dear Anias,
I liked how honest you were in your post. We all judge people by their looks, but I don't think anyone was brave enough to admit it :P I agree that the only way to truly judge someone is through actually getting to know them. So are you saying judging a book by its cover is bad? Should we all be less judgmental of each other? What's on the outside shouldn't be more important then what's on the inside. What I would have loved to see is a little more of what you were thinking on this topic because from what you have written, you had a lot of good arguments. Also you had a few run on sentences, but those are easy to fix :) Over all great post, can't wait to read the next.
Yasmin J
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